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Message no. 1
From: Grey metis76@*****.com
Subject: Job Done
Date: Thu, 30 Mar 2000 14:33:59 -0800 (PST)
So how was that? Any suggestions/comments?

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Message no. 2
From: Grey metis76@*****.com
Subject: Job Done
Date: Thu, 30 Mar 2000 14:34:35 -0800 (PST)
So how was that? Any suggestions/comments?

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Message no. 3
From: Frank Pelletier (Trinity) fpelletier@******.usherb.ca
Subject: Job Done
Date: Thu, 30 Mar 2000 19:19:05 -0500
It sucked! :)

Very good. Couldn't have done it better myself. Of course, you can play
with it (I'm comfortable in my posts with being inside the mind of the
character, but that's my style.), and push the boundaries a little. But the
formatting was excellent. Thumbs up.

Frank
Message no. 4
From: Logan Graves logan1@********.net
Subject: Job Done
Date: Thu, 30 Mar 2000 22:52:11 -0500
The whole thing looked great to me.

Not so much a suggestion, just a curious bit I noticed:
Johny edited out the time-lapses. But not the footage of Katt's appearance.
Perhaps this was purposely to show his inexperience or just to [her] show off.
Still, a good dramatic bit--showing her, either way. ;-)

I personally would be hesitant about letting a non-identifyable Mr. J know what
my partner looks like...but that's just me. (Granted, even with the given
description, she still could have been wearing a mask.) And yeah, I realize the
recording destroys itself. Which is not a bad idea in & of itself. Could have
been useful during the earlier mob wars.

--Fenris
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Message no. 5
From: Grey metis76@*****.com
Subject: Job Done
Date: Thu, 30 Mar 2000 23:26:48 -0800 (PST)
> Johny edited out the time-lapses. But not the
> footage of Katt's appearance.
> Perhaps this was purposely to show his inexperience
> or just to [her] show off.
> Still, a good dramatic bit--showing her, either way.
> ;-)

My characters always end up having a mind of their own
and Katt is a show off like that. She is "Good
Looking and Knows It". Charisma 8 and whatnot =)

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