| From: | Jeffrey Mach <mach@****.CALTECH.EDU> |
|---|---|
| Subject: | Re: etiquette questions |
| Date: | Sat, 30 Nov 1996 21:50:58 -0800 |
from the keyboard:
On Wed, 27 Nov 1996 EBruns@***.COM wrote:
> I've got a plot idea that I would like to begin in the next few weeks and
> want to get your input. I'll try to do this without giving everything away.
>
> The first item is this:
> I want to use Denver's Dreamland Syndicate as one of the focal points of the
> plot. Since it is not overly fleshed out in the sourcebook, I would use my
> interpretation of it. This should not be a problem, however, towards the end
> of the plot Dean Rucco (the DS frontman according to FASA) would have to be
> eliminated. I can see this as being a problem for future plotlines.
>
> If it would be more appropriate, I'll change the name of the Dreamland
> Syndicate and move it to a different city.
While moving it may be unnecessary, I agree with changing the name of the
locale. I assume this place is some sort of "underground" BTL palace or
somesuch? In the Shadowrun times, I highly doubt only one such place
would exist. (On the other hand I would definitely agree that they
wouldn't be as common as a crack den.)
> The second item:
> What types of "Drug stories," if any have been done to death on the list.
I
> don't want to bore you!
Hmmmm. Before my joining the list, I heard there was a story about
Torture BTL's being made and that it was squashed, but other's would be
more knowledgeble and it should be in the logs. For my part, I only
remember the story I was envolved in where a perveyor of "exotic
entertainments" (read BTL, drugs, people) was the target of Quicksilver's
"affection" (read she was ordered to assasinate him). I would suggest
avoiding any plot you have seen in a movie. The only way to bore me is
through poor storytelling and overly simplistic plots.
> The third item:
> When I get this moving, who would be interested in participating
>
> Plot Synopsis -- very early stages
>
> The Dreamland Syndicate is selling a "new and improved" BTL. They range
from
> straight emotion triggers to so called black beetles. The one thing they all
> have in common is a bit of added baggage *insert evil laugh here* The
> runners will investigate and come accross Dean Rucco and his Blonde Bombshell
> of a girlfriend (and very magically inclined). The Mob is not happy with the
> relationship.
>
> Finally, who is the faceless stranger in the black leather trenchcoat and
> fedora with the glowing green eyes?
A) a plot device, B) an escapee from a bad movie, C) someone with poor
fashion sense (egad, glowing green eyes with a black leather
trenchcoat). Only kidding. ;P
> I'll be using a mage and a corporate troubleshooter, so there is plenty of
> room for other characters to come on board. Plus, I would appreciate any
> help on the development end!
I'm not sure if any of my characters would be available or interested, but
I might be willing to help on ideas. I of course would need to know more:
how are the chips "improved", what is the "added baggage", why isn't
the
mob happy and with which relationship? Contact privately with details if
interested.
--Catch you later
Jeff
