From:	Freak Finger <Freakfingr@***.COM>
Subject:	AmerInd Exp. Comments Obj.
Date:	Sun, 25 Oct 1998 21:23:14 EST

>>>>>>KIVA OF LIGHTNING / Objective
Reputation Award: 15. Unique.
Place a token on Kiva of Lightning when it is revealed. If Kiva of Lightn=
ing
begins
owner's
Legwork with a token on it, remove the token and place it face down.
At any time during a shadowrun against this Objective, players may place
Challenges on their
Challenge stack, and turn Runners to add them to the shadowrunning team (t=
o
the
maximum of
six members).
BONUS: If you have scored all four Kiva Objectives, you win the game.
[Dancing figures at a pow-wow, flashing lightning only partially revealing
their
ecstatic faces.]<<<<<<<<
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Maybe you don't want to say anytime during a run challenges may be playe=
d.
Otherwise you might have some wiseguy dropping a challenge while your faci=
ng
one.
How bout during a run challenges may be played before a challenge is revea=
led.
And to clarify the max 6 runners you could say " turn runners to add to th=
e
shadowruning team (max. 6 runners may participate in the run) My first
impression was that you could keep adding runners after your runners were
trashed. So you could send 6 runners and when 1 crooked send in a re-
enforcement. Thats to powerful and i don't think thats what was intended.
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>>>>>>>Land of the long Sun
Reputation Award: 15.
BONUS: When this Objective is scored, all other Objectives are revealed (i=
f a
player
does not
have a ready Objective, turn over the top card of his Objective pile). Ea=
ch
player
may then
search his draw pile for one Challenge to play on each revealed
Objective.<<<<<<
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Maybe add "up to the max. Challenges allowed" at the end there.
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>>>>>>>>>>>>>SUMMER OF THE WOLVES / Objective
Reputation Award: 40. Owner must choose a type of Challenge (Awakened,
Electrical, etc.)
when Summer of the Wolves is revealed. This type of Challenge may not be
sleazed.
REQUIREMENT: Face down Howling Wolf Pack: 6/8 (2¥: +1/+1 until the end o=
f
shadowrun).
<<<<<<<<<<<<
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Clarify the requirment. Instead of "Face down" say defeat and who can =
pump
the 2¥ ? Anyone or just the owner?
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>>>>>>>>THE PASSING OF WINTER / Objective
Reputation Award: 30.
Treat all Runners on shadowrunning team as if they only had the basic leve=
l in
each
of their Skills..........<<<<<<<<<
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Say 1 skill level in each of there skills instead of basic. Tiz a little
easier to understand.


Just a few recomondations i had. I like what i have seen on the set =
so
far. Although i have only seen the obj.
If my recomondations are welcome i might make some more on the rest, bu=
t we
shall have to see.
Freakfinger