From: | Rand Ratinac docwagon101@*****.com |
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Subject: | [RA:S Project] A result!! |
Date: | Tue, 15 Jun 1999 00:51:20 -0700 (PDT) |
Three threads it is, then. If you're wondering, the basic premise,
therefore is that a UCAS military team goes in to grab Dr. Vanessa
Cliber. She's been contacted and has arranged to meet them at a certain
"safe" place. They get her and bug out. As they do, they're ambushed by
a Renraku black-ops team, who plaster most of the UCAS soldiers, steal
Cliber and head to their OWN escape route. Cliber is happy enough to go
with her employers rather than the UCAS. Meanwhile, a shadow team goes
in to look for someone of meaning to one or all of the team. The finale
will involve the shadow team finding their target and getting out
(probably), the Renraku team being ambushed by the survivors of the
UCAS military force, plus the resistance cell they hooked up with
(there you go, Strago - the resistance cell offers to help the UCAS
force get Cliber back if they help them get the leech serum) and then
Deus getting in on the act and the survivors of both teams having to
run without Cliber. That ending is subject to change, though. :)
Anyway, as I promised, I'm going to discuss this point further now:
> I'd like for the writers of the "key" stories to post a list of
their characters and what those characters' functions are, just so when
the rest of us are writing our stories we can use the right names.
Okay, like I said, I originally planned for the core characters to be
created 'by committee' over the list. Thinking about it, though,
that'll be a horror show and it'll take AGES. So if no one objects,
this is what I think should be done - the people who write the
introductory stories for the three threads will create the characters,
then run them out for the list to see and comment on. Any glaring
problems will be fixed and then everyone can get to work.
Which brings us to the introductory stories. I need two volunteers to
do these. I'm going to write the UCAS military introduction, which will
go from them being on the outside, to meeting Cliber, to being ambushed
by Renraku and Deus, to being rescued by the resistance. That leaves us
with the Renraku thread and the shadow team thread.
I thought the Renraku thread could probably start during or just after
their ambush of the UCAS team, but it can certainly start earlier
(although later would probably not be a good idea). This one can go
whereever the writer wants to take it, except the Renraku team CANNOT
escape the arc at this time.
The shadow team story would probably start at or around the time when
they first break into the arc. Apart from that, the writer has pretty
much carte blanche. I think their best method of insertion would
probably be through the ork underground, but if you have a better idea,
then use it.
So there are some rough guidelines - who would like to write those
stories?
That's the next step. Once we have some volunteers, everyone else gets
to decide on what they want to write, if you haven't already. If you're
short on ideas, speak up and I'll plaster some on the list. Again, send
ideas directly to me first. Once everyone's pretty much decided what
they want to do, I'll do up a rough (rough, very rough, very very rough
rough :) ) chronology of the stories and we can get started - if you
haven't already. :) I don't want to discourage you from starting
writing, but if you do start soon, you might have to make a few more
changes than would otherwise be the case. If you can't handle that,
then it's probably best to wait a little while.
Anyway, right now we need two volunteers to write the Renraku and
shadow team introductory threads. Once we have those, the volunteers
have two or three days to ROUGHLY draw up their characters (names,
callsigns, major skills, any exceptional attributes, major
cyberware/spells/physad abilities/drones etc., major gear, short bit on
personality and appearance, anything else you can think of that would
be appropriate) and submit them to the list.
Let's do it...
Oh. Which brings me to a question. The basic military team makeup I was
thinking was a lady mage (none of this sexist crap - they take magical
talent where they can find it :) ), a sniper, a team leader (cybered),
two other cybergoons, one of whom has functions as a combat decker
(deck in his cyberarm), and, possibly, an external rigger. What do you
guys think?
Anyway, my real question pertains to the sniper. Everyone else who goes
in would be armed with top-line assault rifles for that lovely FA
effect. :) (Mage carries an SMG, but still...) The sniper is the only
one who won't have an 'area effect' (spell, grenade launcher or
automatic weapon) weapon. So, to protect him from groups of nasties, I
was thinking of giving him a Walter MA-2100 (military sniper rifle that
can stand being banged around) with an underbarrel grenade launcher.
Feasible? Or would it stuff his rifle around too much? Remember, he
won't actually be fulfilling a standard sniper role as he's going into
the arc with the rest of the team.
==Doc'
(aka Mr. Freaky Big, Super-Dynamic Troll of Tomorrow)
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