| From: | Ayla Renee ReneeKrena@********.net |
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| Subject: | Story synopsis and character |
| Date: | Mon, 5 Jul 1999 22:43:21 -0500 |
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Heres the storyline I'm working on, and a little about the characters....Doc and I have
been discussing it for a while :-) And I'v done some preliminary writing. My RA:S should
come in sometime this week... I need that before I go to far...
The story begins twelve years before the Shutdown... when a Systems technician named
Elysiah Mortimur goes out on a date. Leaving the Renraku compound, he goes to one of his
favorite local dance clubs with a woman he'd just met. He left his little brother, whom
he'd been raising since their parents died at home alone.
The night was great, and in the early hours of the morning he began heading home, when
his date screamed, and he felt arms grab him, and something pressed to his throat, though
it didn't feel like metal.
When he came to, his date was gone, and he was starving. He got in his car, and rushed
back to the arcology. When he arrived at the gate, he was greeted by the guards, who
stopped him, oddly, and began questioning him. A few minutes later he was arrested.
He was taken deep below the arcology, in the areas that the public and most of the
corp doesn't know about. He learned quickly that fangs had been pressed to his throat. He
was a Vampire. And the corp wanted to study him... down to his DNA and molecular
structure. They wanted to find a way to combine the best parts of human and vampire
genes... they wanted to create a mutant string of HMVV to make the "Perfect
Soldier".
Several years later, the shutdown began, and the electronic locks on his doors snapped
open, and he had his chance to find his brother, and his chance for revenge.... Think of
the PR nightmare if this sort of information got out, after all.... I plan to have him
stumble over, and shadow one of the teams to try to find an exit... He wants to come back
later... better prepared... better fed, and on his own terms. Until then though, This is a
buffet!
Like I said, before I take it too much farther, I need RA:S, but this is the basics that I
already have.. and the characters... In case you want to pull them in
Elysiah. He's mad, mostly because he had a guaranteed 20 year contract, and they broke it!
He's also mad because he hasn't seen his brother Joannus in more than a decade. He's a
tall, handsome man, with Dark hair and brown eyes. He is dark skinned, and appears to be
partly asian. His eyes are hard. He's enraged at all thats been done to him, and his
brother... His plans are to get out, sell the information of what the corp is doing,
probably to the media, use the capital to hire a shadow team to get his brother out of the
arcology. He's probably going to shadow the shadow team :) and watch them... for possible
future employment, and to watch and see if they have/find an exit... and use it himself.
More to come later! This shoudl tide you over for now. Comments and critique are always
welcome
A Systems technicial names Elysiah Mortimer and his younger brother Joannus. Their parents
died when they were young, Elysiah 17 and
Joannus 12. Elysiah raised Joannus, and was one of Renrakus better techs.
One night he left for a date, and was in the wrong place at the wrong
time... HE was attacked by a Vampire. Stunned and unsure of what happened he
returned to the corp, they immediatly arrested him, and put him in the
special projects area, faking his death for the benifit of his brother and
to keep questions down.
They used him to try to create the perfect soldier, without cyberware, a
whole new race of half vampire hybreds the human race seems to always strive
for. He's been in there for 9 years now, and now hates the corp with all his
heart. Then Deus comes around, and he gets out, and is mad. His main goals
are to find his brother, get out of there, and get revenge... I'm thinking
that as he's searching for his brother then he runs into the Shadow team.
I'd have to see more of the other stories before I took it any farther..
what do you think?
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<DIV>Heres the storyline I'm working on, and a little about the
characters....Doc and I have been discussing it for a while :-) And I'v done
some preliminary writing. My RA:S should come in sometime this week... I need
that before I go to far...</DIV>
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<DIV> The story begins twelve years before the
Shutdown...
when a Systems technician named Elysiah Mortimur goes out on a date.
Leaving the Renraku compound, he goes to one of his favorite local dance clubs
with a woman he'd just met. He left his little brother, whom he'd been raising
since their parents died at home alone.</DIV>
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<FONT size=3>The night was
great, and in the early hours of the morning he began heading home, when his
date screamed, and he felt arms grab him, and something pressed to his throat,
though it didn't feel like metal.</FONT></FONT></DIV>
<DIV><FONT color=#000000 size=2><FONT
size=3></FONT> <FONT
size=3>When he came to, his date was gone, and he was starving. He got in his
car, and rushed back to the arcology. When he arrived at the gate, he was
greeted by the guards, who stopped him, oddly, and began questioning him.
A few minutes later he was arrested. </FONT></FONT></DIV>
<DIV><FONT color=#000000 size=2><FONT
size=3></FONT> <FONT
size=3>He was taken deep below the arcology, in the areas that the public and
most of the corp doesn't know about. He learned quickly that fangs had been
pressed to his throat. He was a Vampire. And the corp wanted to study
him... down to his DNA and molecular structure. They wanted to find a way to
combine the best parts of human and vampire genes... they wanted to create a
mutant string of HMVV to make the "Perfect
Soldier".</FONT></FONT></DIV>
<DIV><FONT color=#000000 size=2><FONT
size=3></FONT> <FONT
size=3>Several years later, the shutdown began, and the electronic locks on his
doors snapped open, and he had his chance to find his brother, and his chance
for revenge.... Think of the PR nightmare if this sort of information got out,
after all.... I plan to have him stumble over, and shadow one of the teams to
try to find an exit... He wants to come back later... better prepared... better
fed, and on his own terms. Until then though, This is a
buffet!</FONT></FONT></DIV>
<DIV><FONT color=#000000 size=2><FONT
size=3></FONT></FONT> </DIV>
<DIV>Like I said, before I take it too much farther, I need RA:S, but this is
the basics that I already have.. and the characters... In case you want to pull
them in</DIV>
<DIV> </DIV>
<DIV>Elysiah. He's mad, mostly because he had a guaranteed 20 year contract, and
they broke it! He's also mad because he hasn't seen his brother Joannus in more
than a decade. He's a tall, handsome man, with Dark hair and brown eyes. He is
dark skinned, and appears to be partly asian. His eyes are hard. He's enraged at
all thats been done to him, and his brother... His plans are to get out, sell
the information of what the corp is doing, probably to the media, use the
capital to hire a shadow team to get his brother out of the arcology. He's
probably going to shadow the shadow team :) and watch them... for possible
future employment, and to watch and see if they have/find an exit... and use it
himself.</DIV>
<DIV> </DIV>
<DIV> </DIV>
<DIV><FONT color=#000000 size=2>More to come later! This shoudl tide
you over
for now. Comments and critique are always welcome</FONT></DIV>
<DIV> </DIV>
<DIV>A Systems technicial names Elysiah Mortimer and his younger brother
Joannus. Their parents died when they were young, Elysiah 17 and<BR>Joannus 12.
Elysiah raised Joannus, and was one of Renrakus better techs.<BR>One night
he left for a date, and was in the wrong place at the wrong<BR>time... HE was
attacked by a Vampire. Stunned and unsure of what happened he<BR>returned to the
corp, they immediatly arrested him, and put him in the<BR>special projects area,
faking his death for the benifit of his brother and<BR>to keep questions
down.<BR> They used him to try to create the perfect
soldier,
without cyberware, a<BR>whole new race of half vampire hybreds the human race
seems to always strive<BR>for. He's been in there for 9 years now, and now hates
the corp with all his<BR>heart. Then Deus comes around, and he gets out, and is
mad. His main goals<BR>are to find his brother, get out of there, and get
revenge... I'm thinking<BR>that as he's searching for his brother then he runs
into the Shadow team.<BR>I'd have to see more of the other stories before I took
it any farther..<BR>what do you
think?<BR></DIV></BODY></HTML>
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