From:	tonto@********.com tonto@********.com
Subject:	Untitled: Chapter 1
Date:	Mon, 22 May 2000 02:35:10 GMT

I finally got a chance to have a look at your story, and I'm glad I did.
However, I'm afraid that I'm not really in a position to give an educated
opinion on specific aspects, so you'll just have to live with my uneducated
opinion: It was good and I enjoyed it. I think it works well as a stand alone
story, but it also creates interest for the rest of the story. Looking forward
to seeing more.

-Trav