From:	Ratinac, Rand (NSW) RRatinac@*****.redcross.org.au
Subject:	Untitled: Chapter 1
Date:	Mon, 22 May 2000 12:31:41 +1000

> I finally got a chance to have a look at your story, and I'm glad I did.
However, I'm afraid that I'm not really in a position to give an educated
opinion on specific aspects, so you'll just have to live with my uneducated
opinion: It was good and I enjoyed it. I think it works well as a stand
alone story, but it also creates interest for the rest of the story.
Looking forward to seeing more.
>
> -Trav

Thanks, Trav. It seems I succeeded. :)

Btw, I'd echo your comments about your own story. I'd really like to see
more (you have a great style, better than many I've read). I'd give you some
(not-so) educated opinions, but I'm really hard up for time. (If you're
wondering, I'm not an "educated" writer - I haven't done courses etc. - but
I've been writing since I was a kid and I've done a lot of editing for
friends before, so I MOSTLY know what I'm talking about. :) )

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