From: | Joe McRage gburus@***.univ.szczecin.pl |
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Subject: | Need oppinions on my first English text |
Date: | Fri, 10 Nov 2000 08:54:45 +0100 (MET) |
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> Um, that's about it, I'd like to read it again if you can find an English
> speaker to help edit it. I have known a Polish person, and several from that
> general area of the world, who speak English pretty much the way you wrote,
> so it is obviously down to differences in language structure. I'd give you
> more advice, but I'm only new to writing myself, and have no training or
> anything.
> Oh, and sorry about taking so long to comment the first time, my life has
> been hectic.
No problem. I wonder someone ever responded :-)
Gurus.
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