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Message no. 1
From: Paul J. Adam ShadowTK@********.demon.co.uk
Subject: Botched Raid
Date: Sun, 14 May 2000 00:54:57 +0100
*****PRIVATE: Lone Star Archives
>>>>>[And the pooch wore a big smile all day.

+++++begin video
Early morning, in one of Tacoma's less salubrious areas. A cold drizzle
falls from the grey sky, blown along by the same breeze that bounces
stuffer-wrappers along the sidewalk and flutters the tarpaulins covering
several of the tenement buildings.

The tenements are ancient 1960s housing projects, mostly abandoned,
demolition teams working along the street to clear them for new
construction. Determinedly cheerful banners hang from a few empty-but-
not-yet-destroyed, announcing that the Metroplex (in association with
the United Corporate Council) are Building A Better Tacoma Here For All
Our Futures. Some ad-man's idea of a "balanced family unit" - a happy
family of improbable racial mixture - smile garishly around the text,
their background cleverly suggesting a blue-collar paradise home.


The garbage truck grinds along the road, its transmission complaining
and the drive motors moaning with the characteristic sound of worn-out
brushgear. Not much to collect in this road: the tenements are mostly
abandoned, just a few squatters and other low-lifes occupying the vacant
slums, and only the last building in the row still occupied. The garbage
crew have mostly just a couple of new, safety-orange dumpsters to empty:
refuse left by the construction crews who are moving into and clearing
the sites.

Perhaps, *this* time, the new housing units soon to rise here will be a
happy, thriving community, bringing new economic life to this down-at-
heel corner of the Metroplex... but none of the garbage crew seem to be
holding their breath waiting, as they load the first dumpster onto the
back of their truck.


As the truck lifts its load up, gulping down the tide of waste, the
camerawoman swings herself up into the cab and hooks a very un-
trashwomanlike radio headset over her ear. "Black Widow to Beatles,
we're moving into position on schedule. Sitrep?"

'Beatles' replies, slightly scratchy over the encrypted radio link, "Our
boy's on the move and heading in. Stand by."

"You're late, Beatles... okay, we'll wing it. Keep us informed."

"Want us to patch you in on his feed?"

"Yeah, that'll help." Hart nods, then realises the radio can't see.
"We'll stage a delay."


The truck driver looks enquiringly at Hart, says "You want us to break
down for a few minutes?" He's a Troll, and might actually be a real
garbageman: certainly nursing this old and underfunded truck around
Seattle's poorer neighbourhoods must take some skill.

"Yeah, if you can do that easily...?"

"Null problemo, Officer. You mind noisy?"

"We been quiet in this heap so far?" Hart chuckles.

"Okay... so I do _this_-" the Troll throws two levers, and an agonised
mechanical grinding noise comes from the back of the truck - "and it
sounds like we got a real problem. Now I do _this_ -" he holds down a
switch and revs the motor hard - "and smoke comes out the back. Pretty
cool, huh?"

"Yeah, not bad." Hart looks out, sees blue-white clouds billowing from
under the truck. "Not too serious?"

"Hey, I just stirred a broken driveshaft around some, won't break it any
more, and vented the fuel cell's waste trap. We're no more busted up
than we were."

"Looks pretty bad, though. Nice work." Hart admits, getting out of the
cab. "Beatles, this is Widow, we're stopped for a few minutes now. Made
some noise, but looks natural."

"Okay. Spider Mike's on the way in. Patching him in on channel five...
now."


As Hart joins the three or four others clustered around the side of the
truck, apparently arguing about whether to call for a recovery vehicle
or try to fix the problem in place, her radio comes live with another
set of voices: a nervous male talking to himself.


"Hey hey hey, this is Spider Mike, coming atcha loud'n'clear on Radio
KCOP! Walking 'cross the street, gonna help put some nasty mo'fraggers
away, going up to the door, got to shut up else that _bad_ piece'a'drek
there's gonna hear me! My man, how you hangin'?"

"Down in the dirt. I hate this fragging rain, pal, an'I don't like you
neither. 'Gainst the wall." A deeper voice, also male, pronounced
Barrens accent.

"Hey, no need to get personal- Hey! You get your hand off my ass!"

"Gotta search you, same as everyone."

"Yeah? You wanna feel me up, you buy me dinner first, buttwipe! You guys
_always_ got to grope my dick?"

"Yeah, I gotta, and I don't like it. You think I _wanna_ get near that
sad little weenie? Go on, yer clean, get in there. Boss man's waiting
for you."



Hart cuts in on the other frequency. "Beatles, he in? We clean?"

"Yeah, all clear. Louie Cardelli and his entourage arrived thirty
minutes ago, went to their secured apartment. Three guys with him, looks
like one tech and one muscle. Two in the pad keeping it clean for him."
Beatles reports, as if reciting what he'd already told Hart several
times before. "All on the green."


Spider Mike sounds like he's fairly fit, from the pace of his footsteps
up the stairs, until - "WHOA! Man, put that thing away! Jee-zus!"

"You don't run up stairs at us, friend. Makes us nervous."

"Well, you shoulda said!" Mike sounds properly outraged. "Pretty Boy
downstairs was too busy squeezing my buns to tell me that drek. You
gonna have someone touch my dick, why can't you have her be a she and
cute?"

"Okay, okay, shut the frag up, come on in." The sound of a security
grill sliding, then again, and locking behind Mike. "Patrone, this is
our customer Spider Mike. Mike, this is Mr Cardelli, and this is Jim,
our tech. Jim will demonstrate the product, then you and Mr Cardelli can
negotiate your deal."


As 'Jim' and Spider Mike get into a discussion of BTL chip technicalia,
Hart keys her radio again. "Still clear, Beatles? We should be getting
ready to move."

"Soon as they close the deal, roll in. We'll take the bozo on the front
door, you seal off the back."

"We still clear? No backup, no other players?" Hart presses.

"Look, no non-residents have been in or out of that building all day,
and there's only the painting crew next door-"

"Next door?" The Troll garbageman says incredulously. "You're drekking
me? They're _demolishing_ that place next week!"

Hart swears foully, not caring that the radio's hot-miked. "Beatles,
we're compromised, move in now!"


"What?"

"Third party! We're gonna get hit!" Hart is already running from the
truck.

Too late, as automatic weapons fire booms and echoes between the
buildings. A grenade explodes with a dull thump, and Spider Mike's radio
feed dies in a squeal of feedback... almost certainly at the same time
as Mike himself.

By the time Hart reaches the alleyway between the two buildings, looking
up over the high-profile tritium-inlaid sights of her Richard Wilson
racegun, a walkway has been pushed out between facing windows: Hart
covers it for a few seconds, but there's no movement. The raiders must
have crossed it already.

"Cragie! Milton! Back stairs!" Hart shouts at the two other 'garbagemen'
following her: Milton a young, scared Ork, Cragie a burly, paunched
human. Like her, both have their sidearms drawn: unlike her, both have
issue Thunderbolts. Milton hits the fire door with his shoulder and the
lockwork gives way: he and Cragie disappear inside.

"Beatles, I got a Mob war in progress, what's happening out front?" Hart
asks her radio as she starts up the fire escape, still covering the
improvised walkway and the windows.

"I don't fragging know! Mike's dead and we got gunfire but that's all!"
Beatles sounds scared, angry and helpless: participation in violent
incidents like this is rare in the Narcotics scheme of things, and
'Beatles' has almost no information except for the undisputed fact that
his carefully-planned chip-bust is ruined and his informant is dead.

Hart presses on, up the stairs, suddenly darting for a doorway's poor
cover as a coverall-clad figure runs across the walkway: out of one
window, along the planking, into the building opposite. She's raising
her pistol when bullets smack into the concrete above her head and she
dives sideways, as a second 'painter' crosses the walkway with a heavy
bundle as more bullets ricochet off the wall and the fire escape: none
reach Hart, but she's too busy dodging to return fire.

A third 'painter' runs across the planking, and this time Hart has her
pistol raised and aimed in time, and fires twice: blood sprays from the
man's shoulder and he wails in pain, but still throws his bundle through
the window ahead of him. Hart's third shot blows splinters out of the
walkway, as the wounded 'painter' sprays automatic gunfire at her -
wild, one-handed, but still deadly - and she yet again has to scramble
out of the way of his fire. The walkway falls past her as she's getting
back to her feet: they're all out, why bother retrieving some 2x4 and a
few nails?




Hart reaches some internal decision, and vaults over the edge of the
fire escape: falling two floors to land, hard, on the alley's
ferroconcrete surface. She lands, rolls, comes up running with a
limping, painful gait but with the Wilson automatic still clutched in
her hand.

Across the back of the to-be-demolished building, past scaffolding and
flapping tarpaulins, under the smugly smiling family promising a golden
future, Hart rounds the corner to the _next_ alley in time to catch the
gunmen as they're fleeing. Down the fire escape and out, it seems.


Three of them. Two already in the back of the van, the third handing a
black plastic sack up into the van with one hand, and Hart doesn't stop
to evaluate risks but just aims, flicks on the SureShot light and shouts
"POLICE! DROP THE WEAPON!"

Of course, he doesn't. Of course, he turns to fire at Hart.

Lieutenant Julianne Hart squeezes off two shots, very fast, a perfect
double-tap, and the man in the white overalls and the painter's fume
mask is tossed backwards: dropping the black plastic sack and his
submachinegun at the same time.


The van's doors are closing before the alleged painter hits the alley
floor, the van accelerating. Hart aims... then lowers the weapon. Lone
Star regulations strongly discourage random pistol fire at moving
vehicles... too hard to disable them, too easy to cause collateral
damage. She settles for calling in an APB on the vehicle, reciting its
description and tags... though odds are it'll be ditched within ten
blocks and the gunmen switched to a different, clean way out.




"Beatles, I got one of our unwanted guests." The Lieutenant walks
towards her victim, keeping her pistol trained on him. "Don't think he's
going to make it." Two .408 Magnums in the chest, and the man lies in a
spreading pool of dark blood where the bullets pierced body armour,
skin, flesh and bone. Though he's breathing, it's with a horrible,
gurgling note that is weaker on each inhalation, bright red bubbles
seething out of his chest with every exhale. "Two more in a van, called
in, we'll find it burning a klick away."

"Roger that." Beatles sounds sick, tired, helplessly angry. Hundreds of
man-hours of patient work and careful planning have just been squandered
in a short ugly orgy of gunfire. "Mike's dead. So are two of Cardelli's
guards. No sign of Louie and Hotbox, we're searching for'em... ah, drek.
We got another shooting. Someone came at your guy Cragie with a gun."

"Oh, great. This gets better and better." Hart remembers to kill the
radio before swearing this time. "Okay. Okay. Backup?"

"Coming. In force. No word on the van yet. No sign of Cardelli."

"Probably already in the wiring ducts or the sewer. Keep people on the
exits and try to find'em all." Hart clicks the safety on her pistol, as
the man at her feet makes an awful choking noise, jerks convulsively and
dies. "Fuck, fuck, fuck, fuck, fuck, I hate this fucking job sometimes."
+++++end video


This is not good. Spider Mike and three of Cardelli's bozos down,
Cardelli wounded but alive (_bad_ news from those Latino SOBs, they'll
want payback) and no word on the shooters except that, guess what, they
were loading APEX ammo.

The word or phrase you're looking for, contestants, is "Aw,
SHIT!"]<<<<<
-- Lt. Julianne Hart
Lone Star (Tacoma)
Message no. 2
From: Paul J. Adam ShadowTK@********.demon.co.uk
Subject: Botched Raid
Date: Thu, 18 May 2000 23:14:20 +0100
>>>>>[Well, we got news from Tacoma.

A chip raid went badly wrong with five or six dead. One of them, a
fourteen-year-old boy who allegedly came out of his family's apartment
waving a gun at armed police officers, who properly and correctly shot
him dead on the spot.

Or, a trigger-happy cop blew away a young kid by mistake, then planted a
weapon on him to cover up.


I ought to take bets. In fact, I might. Ten to one on the cop getting
any sort of punishment beyond suspension on full pay until the whitewash
dries. Any takers?]<<<<<
-- Jumbo <23:13:45/05-17-61>
Message no. 3
From: Paul J. Adam ShadowTK@********.demon.co.uk
Subject: Botched Raid
Date: Thu, 18 May 2000 23:17:47 +0100
*****PRIVATE: Julianne

Just so you've got an off-the-record record of what was said...

Sorry to give you a hard time, but better now than if some
rentapolitician decides to wade in and grabs something we missed or
glossed over.


+++++begin transcript
J: Lt Julianne Hart (Homicide)
N: Lt Nicola Hanley (Internal Affairs)

N: Hearing commenced, oh-eight-fifty-two, sixteenth May 2061.
Preliminary investigation by IAD into a chipware raid and officers-
involved shooting incident on Sunday the fourteenth. Lieutenant
Julianne Hart, can you summarise the incident?

J: Sure. It was a fuckup.

N: In a _little_ more detail?

J: I and two other Homicide detectives were assigned to work with
Narcotics, who wanted some extra manpower for a chip bust they felt
might turn violent. Narcotics had an informant, Michael Silk,
nicknamed 'Spider Mike', who was willing to wear a wire while
purchasing a quantity of BTL chips from Mr Tony Cardelli. Since Mr
Cardelli had several well-armed bodyguards and a reputation for
violence, the narcs wanted more manpower, and I was available.

N: Just you?

J: No, Sergeant Cragie and Detective Milton were also assigned. We used
the garbage run as cover and to get us in close, so we would be able
to react quickly when the Narco boys made their move.

N: But they never did make their move?

J: Nope. A bunch of third parties intervened. They'd sneaked into the
adjacent building disguised as a painting crew, it was only the
garbage truck driver who made them when he heard about it. We'd have
been caught with our drawers even further down if he hadn't been on
the ball.

N: You assumed this was a threat?

J: I prepared for the worst case, which was that the third parties were
armed and present to conduct a raid of their own. As it turned out,
that assumption was completely correct. Three shooters with automatic
weapons, expending over two hundred rounds, killing Spider Mike and
three of Cardelli's men, wounding Cardelli. I fired twice, wounding
one of them, as they left the building: engaged them again as they
entered their getaway vehicle, firing two rounds and killing one of
them.

N: I'd like to touch on that. You used a non-issue firearm?

J: Approved by my Captain.

N: What is this weapon? I gather it's rather exotic?

J: It's an Ares Predator. It's just been modified a little. <Sound of
metal and gunleather, then of a weapon being cleared> See for
yourself.

N: Holy... that's nice. But definitely not an issue Thunderbolt.

J: More accurate, more precise, and I joined when the Predator was the
issue sidearm. Besides, it was a gift from a... friend.

N: Friend?

J: Commander Mitchell, US Navy, XO of Small Boat Unit 12. I'd asked for
shoulder weapons, given the risk, and was told the chances of a
shooting incident were too low to merit issuing SMGs and shotguns. So
I left my burst-fire assault-weapon Thunderbolt behind and took this
less-lethal weapon instead.

N: Don't be sarcastic, Juli, it doesn't suit you. There was another
officer-involved shooting that day, wasn't there? Sergeant Cragie
shot and killed an armed juvenile.

J: If you - no.

N: Could you repeat that?

J: No, I would prefer not to.

N: I'm afraid you must, Lieutenant: you were in direct tactical command
of Sergeant Cragie. You also submitted a request that he not be
assigned to the mission. Why?

J: I lacked faith in Sergeant Cragie's ability to handle such a
situation.

N: Hypothetically speaking, would you request an officer be de-assigned
if you considered he might shoot a civilian in error, then plant a
weapon on that civilian to hide his error?

J: I can't comment on hypotheticals.

N: Do you think Cragie fucked up?

J: I wasn't there, so I can't judge. Ask Detective Milton.

N: I did. He says it was dark and he couldn't see clearly, but Cragie
was closer and had a better view. He got the stammers when I asked if
Cragie planted a gun on the boy. He didn't deny it either. Rosalia
Martinez is explicit that her son was unarmed when he went to the
door.

J: Then why are you asking me, Nicki? I was outside shooting it out with
the Mystery Mob. Lean on Milton until he talks.

N: Come _on_, Juli, Milton's twenty-four, just made detective, scared,
and working with a crowd of old-timers who are all Cragie's best
buddies. You think he'll remember anything clearly for IAD? Help me
out.

J: If I didn't know you better, I'd say you were scalphunting.

N: Look, Joaquim Martinez was holding an Ares Light Fire in his right
hand. None of his prints on the weapon except right under his
fingers. He'd managed to lock and load a full magazine of APDS
without leaving a single print anywhere on the weapon. Cragie has a
docket for fifty rounds of .32 Caseless APDS for his personal backup
piece, of which he can only produce thirty-four now, claiming he
expended the rest on the range and 'forgot' to write it up. And of
course he's probably got more than one Light Fire

I don't have enough to convict. But there's enough there that Lone
Star will get buttfucked by anyone who doesn't like the cops. Human
officer blasts teenage boy to death and walks. Corrupt cops close
ranks to protect murderer. Cragie picked exactly the wrong kid, the
Martinez boy's a model citizen. No convictions, no cautions, does
volunteer work for his church, so why's he coming at a cop waving a
gun?

J: I wasn't there, I didn't see, I can't help you, Nick. I can tell you
I agree with you. I can say, Cragie's a drunk and a bad cop and I
didn't want him along. But that's in confidence to an IAD officer and
neither of us can make it stick in court. Stick to what we can use.

N: So you won't protect him?

J: Damn right I won't. I'll talk to Milton and see if I can persuade him
to come clean.

N: Thanks.

J: Don't thank me until you hear the story. Maybe, just maybe, the
Martinez kid really did have a gun. Came out to defend his home and
Cragie shot first. Just 'cause I don't like the guy, doesn't mean
he's not entitled to a fair trial.

N: How about Joaquim Martinez?

J: You find a way to bring him back to life, let me know and I'll help
you do it. Now, we're picking up the pieces. Speaking of which, any
word on the guy I shot? The one we had on the sidewalk, I mean?

N: Yeah, we got an ID. Kenny Broome, age twenty, couple of busts for
weapons and assault and piddly drek, last known to be working for
Sato Uehara's clan.

J: Ah, shit, that's bad. Cardelli versus Uehara.

N: Scumbags killing scumbags. Boo hoo.

J: Yeah, except for the people caught in the crossfire. Neither of them
play nice.

N: ...Yeah. Any ideas?

J: Sure, let me out of here so I can chase the case.

N: Anything else I can do for you?

J: Get me some more manpower?

N: We're suspending Cragie. I can lend you Milton in the meantime. Plus
I can get you a partner.

J: I said _manpower_, not _partner_ -

N: Too bad, you want help and this is the only way I can do it.

J: Okay, okay, see what you can do... anything else?

N: Not yet. I'll be back if the case hots up. There'll be a hearing
about the Martinez boy, almost certainly. Will you testify?

J: Direct questions only, no opinions, no hypotheticals.

N: Your evaluation as a commander.

J: ...Rat out a fellow officer?

N: Keep the force clean. You're asking Milton to do more.

J: Yeah. Yeah, I know. Okay, my evaluation, yeah.

N: And I'll see about warm bodies.

J: I need _cops_. Got Chris any time I want a warm body. Having trouble
fending him off, actually.

N: Chris is your cat?

J: No, that's Nicodemus and Cat. Chris is Commander Mitchell.

N: Oh. I see. Anyway, we're done...
+++++end transcript

On the manpower front, I have a possible partner for you. Magician,
SWAT-trained, could be handy...

Scratch possible. You're working together. Deal with it.]<<<<<
-- Lt Nicola Hanley <23:16:53/05-17-61>
Internal Affairs Division
Lone Star (Tacoma)
Message no. 4
From: Grey metis76@*****.com
Subject: Botched Raid
Date: Fri, 19 May 2000 07:49:26 -0700 (PDT)
>>>>>[I'm not much into betting myself and this is
another one I'll stay away from. Man.. this kinda
shit really pisses me off..]<<<<<

--Johny <07:49:21/05-18-61>

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